Hey Colleen! I am writing on your comment wall for the extra credit blog comments. When I first saw your name on the roster for this class, I was ecstatic to know someone else in the class. I just wanted to say thank you for all of your helpful comments on my stories. They have been constructive and encouraging, so thank you for that! I hope all is well and your internship in Kansas this Christmas break went very smoothly.
Hi there, Colleen! I just wanted to saw Thank you for any comments that you have left on my posts and/or comment wall. They have been very positive and kind. I hope you have found my comments helpful and nice as well. I really do like the layout of your page and I also think your Corgi is adorable. I also like how you put your tweets on your comment wall page. I don't use Twitter very much, if at all, so it's very interesting to me how it all works. The only social media I use regularly is FaceBook. Lol I hope you have a good rest of the evening, plus I hoe the rest of your semester goes great! Take care!
I really enjoyed reading your storytelling post entitled "Tortoise's Tragic Demise in North England." It was a creative way to retell the story, and I must say that I was struck by its clever originality. Most of all, I appreciated how you wrote it in the form of an obituary (I think the last sentence makes me think that), and an intriguing one, at that. It would be quite a pleasant surprise if more obituaries looked this way!
Anyhow, I only noticed a few minor details in punctuation, but that's really it. Sometimes at the end of a quote, you typed a period instead of a comma. For instance, near the top of the story one of the sentences ends as follows: "'…when he came down with a cold.' said Darla." The quote could be better punctuated if the period after "cold" were replaced with a comma.
However, this is very minor! I'm working on improving my punctuation with quotations, so perhaps I just noticed it because of that. Nice job with this story! Very creative and smooth writing.
Thanks for your very constructive comment on my Storybook project a few weeks ago! I knew my website design was missing something, and I think you were correct to say that it was color that it lacked. While I haven't yet changed this, I think it will be a great addition.
Also, I'm glad the "illogical and unscientific" bit stuck out to you. I think it's how we often deal with illness, and it's fascinating to think of the explanations that people create to explain biological pathologies. I hope you'll return to my storybook to read more!
Hi Colleen, thank you for leaving me feedback about my storybook. I am glad that you enjoyed the font and the hot pink. Clearly, pink is my favorite color. I really appreciate how positive your comments were. I am glad that you enjoyed my reading. Also, the positive feedback really makes me feel better about my writing. Thank you again.
Colleen, I appreciate you leaving feedback on my storytelling posts throughout the semester so far. It is always good to get feedback from other people. I noticed you said that snakes freak you out from one of my stories. Snakes are, without a doubt, my biggest fear haha. Thanks again!
I just wanted to reconnect with you and say thanks for commenting on my posts for this class throughout the semester. Your feedback is appreciated. I feel like you have really helped me with your various encouraging words and critical feedback. I wish you the best of luck with the rest of the semester in this class. Thanks again and congrats on almost graduation time!
Hey Colleen! I am writing on your comment wall for the extra credit blog comments. When I first saw your name on the roster for this class, I was ecstatic to know someone else in the class. I just wanted to say thank you for all of your helpful comments on my stories. They have been constructive and encouraging, so thank you for that! I hope all is well and your internship in Kansas this Christmas break went very smoothly.
ReplyDeleteHi there, Colleen! I just wanted to saw Thank you for any comments that you have left on my posts and/or comment wall. They have been very positive and kind. I hope you have found my comments helpful and nice as well. I really do like the layout of your page and I also think your Corgi is adorable. I also like how you put your tweets on your comment wall page. I don't use Twitter very much, if at all, so it's very interesting to me how it all works. The only social media I use regularly is FaceBook. Lol
ReplyDeleteI hope you have a good rest of the evening, plus I hoe the rest of your semester goes great! Take care!
Hi Colleen,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your storytelling post entitled "Tortoise's Tragic Demise in North England." It was a creative way to retell the story, and I must say that I was struck by its clever originality. Most of all, I appreciated how you wrote it in the form of an obituary (I think the last sentence makes me think that), and an intriguing one, at that. It would be quite a pleasant surprise if more obituaries looked this way!
Anyhow, I only noticed a few minor details in punctuation, but that's really it. Sometimes at the end of a quote, you typed a period instead of a comma. For instance, near the top of the story one of the sentences ends as follows: "'…when he came down with a cold.' said Darla." The quote could be better punctuated if the period after "cold" were replaced with a comma.
However, this is very minor! I'm working on improving my punctuation with quotations, so perhaps I just noticed it because of that. Nice job with this story! Very creative and smooth writing.
Hi Colleen,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your very constructive comment on my Storybook project a few weeks ago! I knew my website design was missing something, and I think you were correct to say that it was color that it lacked. While I haven't yet changed this, I think it will be a great addition.
Also, I'm glad the "illogical and unscientific" bit stuck out to you. I think it's how we often deal with illness, and it's fascinating to think of the explanations that people create to explain biological pathologies. I hope you'll return to my storybook to read more!
Thanks, again.
Best,
Cole
Hi Colleen, thank you for leaving me feedback about my storybook. I am glad that you enjoyed the font and the hot pink. Clearly, pink is my favorite color. I really appreciate how positive your comments were. I am glad that you enjoyed my reading. Also, the positive feedback really makes me feel better about my writing. Thank you again.
ReplyDeleteColleen, I appreciate you leaving feedback on my storytelling posts throughout the semester so far. It is always good to get feedback from other people. I noticed you said that snakes freak you out from one of my stories. Snakes are, without a doubt, my biggest fear haha. Thanks again!
ReplyDeleteHi Colleeeeeen!
ReplyDeleteI just wanted to reconnect with you and say thanks for commenting on my posts for this class throughout the semester. Your feedback is appreciated. I feel like you have really helped me with your various encouraging words and critical feedback. I wish you the best of luck with the rest of the semester in this class. Thanks again and congrats on almost graduation time!